Sunday, July 27, 2014

Haiku - "a glimpse of dawn"





as a white dove lands
words unspoken yet knowing-
the glow of the dawn


Inspired by:

Carpe Diem #525 Buson (5), "a glimpse of dawn"

4 comments:

  1. The unspoken words sometimes say more than the spoken ones.

    A Glimpse Through a Cleft

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  2. What a beautiful haiku Jamie. Really I am in awe ... I love to use this one for one of our upcoming Tan Renga Challenges if you don't mind? Please let me know if that's ok ...

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