Tuesday, July 22, 2014

Haiku - Summer darkness


Haiku - Summer darkness





hot Summer darkness
they rendezvous and converge-
bats at rivers edge


Inspired by:

Carpe Diem Ghost Writer #18 Jessica Slavin on Issa


6 comments:

  1. Really liking the idea of a bat rendezvous!

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  2. I would think "rendezvous" a difficult word to use in a short poem, but you've managed it well.

    At the River’s Edge

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  3. Thank You. At first I didn't know how I would go about this one. It was a bit of a challenge at first but once i visualized it...it got better. : )

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  4. A nice idea, a movable riverbank in the darkness. Was difficult commenting with the captcha refusing my efforts a few times!

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  5. Beautifull scene you paint here with your words Jamie great!

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  6. What a great image you have created here.

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